Points from mrs Hafenrichter
-Make points about age generally not just about Amy.
-Too descriptive.
-Dont retell the story as this doesn't help you link to specific micro elements.
-Be clear when you quote a character that this is dialogue.
-Don't give opinions, analyse.
-Use correct terms- "reverse shot was used"
-Spell key terms properly- non diegetic music
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